Yes, you are right about En grammar. Good job!

1.The West Point Management Summit Forum: ...Forum 2009

2.经理人传媒和中旭教育集团: we need further check the proper nouns in our final translation job, "Manager Media" & "Zhongxu Education Group" are just literal translations.

3.高度认同与赞许:omit "高度"

4.全球教育培训界及政商学界:omit "全球"

5.The donation to the Hope schools in the west region this time is not temporary:...not by chance,偶然

6.In 2008,Zhongxu Group knew that the primary school in Zenjia village, Tongzhou district,Dazhou city,Sichuan province has been destroyed:...had been destroyed

7.Another 3 Hope schools were built in succession in Guanshan villiage, Shifu village and Danlin village:其他冠山村希望小学、石佛小学、丹岭小学也相继落成. Excuse me, I don't know if your translation is correct. From literal meaning, it's different from sourcing text...

8. 拉里.R.唐尼索恩博士现场讲授西点军校管理、领导力、执行力等模式精髓:omit "精髓"

Interesting! Thanks for your job sharing!

1.An old man in England planted out a half-red-half-green apple: As a title, could you make it compacter? An English Old Man planted out A Half-red-half-green Apple?  

2.foundd: found, typo error

3.but when he approached the apple tree:apple can be deleted here

4.odd:peculiar,"奇特的" not "古怪的"

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About the job, not too bad. But can you see the pictures? I can't...

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Mary Wei

i like your job!

1. triffles: trifles

2. He can be the richest: He can't be the richest

You are welcome! Aabout double/single quotation marks (""/''), from my own view, they can be used like below:

1. Germany Develops an Instrument Can Smell the Maturity of Fruits: ...'Smell'...

2. “闻”in body: Marked like this, "smell"

3. 研究人员表示，尽管这种仪器上市后售价将达到上千欧元，但要比食品实验室的测量仪便宜许多，且效率更高: This is an indirectly quoted sentence. Thus, we don't need use double quotation marks ("") in our translated job based on the principle of respecting resource text as translators.

Wonderful article! Thanks for your efforts & sharing! You can do better and better...

1. Please use "she/he" or "manager" to replace only "he".

2. 累死: According to context, it also can be translated into only "exhaust(ed)"

3. pening-up which gives our contry: opening-up; country 

4. 服务器: server

5. I really appreciate your enterprising, you have translated more than original text...

Thanks for your job & sharing! Go for it!

大宗水果批发商:wholesaler for a large amount of fruits

The concrete working process of the instrument is using the macromolecule separator column to purifies the fruits:to purify

at last the instrument will according to the reaction status to analyze the maturity of the fruits:at last, the instrument will analyze the maturity of the fruits according to the reaction status

in the food library: in the food laboratory

双引号（“”）的使用请斟酌

不错，推荐。请加上译文中应有的标点符号吧……

Wonderful job! Recommend & collect it!

1.they want to be a child a again: the second "a" should be deleted;

2.they should forgive thenselves: thenselves->themselves

她告诉记者，要不是1985年泰坦尼克号沉没的灾难被世人发现，她不会突然变成名人，参与纪录片的摄制，和出席媒体访问。

加油！

Great job! Collect.

1。These days there are many, many podcasts available:漏译

2。and outside my comfort zone：译文有待斟酌

3。proverb：谚语非俗语

4。你会选择那种学习方法呢->哪种

5。Wonderful, you mark the info about Sarah Caldwell!

Yes, very practical!

one side of which serves as a mirror while the other side becomes a mirror when simply folded up->one side of which serves as an ironing board...

1.nucleus management leve->core management level

2.Professor Gao Qunyao->Doctor...