08-21
点评了译文 Quote The basic qualities that the managers should have(original)

但凡叫管理者就会有一定的自主权: Anyone called manager should have certain autonomy.

习惯用语
be annoyed with sb. for sth. 
 对(某人)为(某事)而生气
be annoyed with sb. at sth. 
 对(某人)为(某事)而生气


所以当管理者为管理不好而烦恼时,往往是管理者本身出了差错,这是就是我们该重视管理自己的时候了.
So when managers are annoyed for bad managements which are always caused by their own mistakes, then it's the time to take managing themselves seriously.   


08-12
点评了译文 Germany Develops an Instrument Can Smell the Maturity of Fruits

标题的语法有点问题, 句子的主语应该是INSTRUMENT, '德国开发'应该作为定语, 修饰INSTRUMENT, 而不是作为句子的主语. 是否可以这要翻译呢: An Instrument Developed In Germany Can Smell The Maturity Of Fruits.  

在翻译'德国科研人员日前开发出一种高科技仪器' 时时态是否应该用完成时态, 而不是过去式. 而后面'可以马上“闻”出水果的成熟度.' 可以译成一个定语从句, 而不是单独的句子, 若要译为独立的句子, 需加连词. 可译为: German scientific researchers have developed a high-tech instrument recently, which can detect the maturity of fruits by smelling immediately.

最后一句'is so more cheaper than the admeasuring apparatus in food library, and has more efficiency.' 里, 修饰比较级'cheaper'时应该用'much'而不是'more'. 另外, 'has more efficiency' 是否可以译为'more efficient' 和'much cheaper' 并列呢?


08-10
点评了译文 Eight Laws to Make Your Marriage Happy

在翻译'多少定律'的时候, 下面这几句是不是应该和前面第一句的风格一致, 这样才能保持和原文的平行风格一致.

少擅自做主,多点儿商量;少吩咐,多动手;少批评,多鼓励。

Fewer unauthorized decisions, and more discussions; fewer orders, and more hands; less criticism and more encouragement.

另外, 在翻译的时候有的不该省略的地方, 是不能随便省略的. 比如: '不要企图改造对方,不要企图将对方变成另一个你'. 后面的'不要企图将对方变成另一个你' 和前面一句的关系应该是渐进加强关系, 不能省略不翻译.

 don’t attempt to rebuild him or even change him into another you. 

 


01-07
点评了译文 易握夹: 让书本不再从手中滑落
多谢指点!我也觉得SECURE译成'可靠'不太贴切.

2008
点评了译文 See men's characteristics from the watches they wear

呵呵, 我也翻了这篇文章的, 没想到一种语言只能被一个人选择翻译. 既然我也翻译了, 那我也把我翻译的贴出来, 大家切磋切磋吧~~~

See Men’s Characters From Their Watches

Nowadays, men’s accessories are getting more and more. But the accessories, which can reflect men’s taste and identities, may be the simple and fashionable jewelries and watches. Different watches reflect different characters. Therefore, we can get a glimpse of men’s inner world from their watches, where we can find some interesting phenomenon.

 

The Prudent and Pragmatic

This type of men may probably wear a formal series of watches of various brands. Different payment abilities afford different watch classes. But their common point is to pursue simplicity and sureness. With such a watch, almost any occasions could be handled. Traditionally, this type of men is considered as ‘Good Men’, who is stable and steady, without flaring diamond accessories and dizzy functionalities. That is such type of men, simple but absolutely worth women’s rely on and trust. 

 

The Fashion and Sporting 

This type of men always keeps a young heart. Don’t think that fashion and cool just belong to the young. Many thirty-something men are wearing watches of above 40mm diameter, or with a cluster of time circles on the dial, which easily indicate such men must be interesting persons and good at enjoying life. Being with such type of men, life is full of fresh and excitement. Certainly, it’s not sure if they will encounter any unexpected affectional affairs.

 

The Flaunting and Swanking

Diamond! Gold! They are vital accessories of this type of men. And certainly watches need them to appreciate without exceptions. It is of course the best to have the plate and the chain inlaid with diamonds. And if it is hard to be met, at least the scale and the bezel need to be decorated at first. As soon as such men stretch his hand without speaking, they will be treated as rich people, who are willing to be known as rich. When encounter such men, women should at first think over whether they are young and beautiful enough to be another living visiting card of such men to show off. Otherwise, nothing needs to be discussed.

 

The Maverick and Unconventional

This type of men will never wear watches of main brands or popular styles, because they don’t want to be the same as most people. But because of their limited economic ability, they can’t afford expensive and scarce watches. So they have to choose those unpopular brands, which are unconventional and inexpensive. Such men have a strong sense of self-respect and a little sense of inferiority in their characters. If women want to get along with such men, they should have a consideration for men’s feelings.

 

The Capable and Matured

It’s no need for this type of men to wear gold or diamond watches to prove their capacities. Most people may not recognize the watches they wearing, even no chance for them to recognize. But it doesn’t matter. What those men need is just such low-key delicacy, and deep inner ability from subtleness. Such men should be generous with special options on life. Certainly, they should not be young. And looking around those women along with them, you will find a common point of these men, that is, ‘Wisdom’.