点评了译文 Change your mind and change your life
Copy this to MS Word, you can see some wrong spelling and improper format, a space should be given after the punctuation and the first word of each sentence should be capital word. Above all will make your work better.

点评了译文 advantage
Tooooo many commas, such as "make, is to think" and "you get, to your retire", besides, the title should be a capital word. Keep working!

点评了译文 纤巧贝壳手机--诺基亚6555
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点评了译文 master your life
1. "something they are not desired to do", should be "they do not desire to do" 2. "worth" is a verb, worth doing, and worthy is an adj, be worthy of...