点评了译文 seven suggestions on being welcomed in the office
Thank you for your suggestion. I think it's also ok.

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wang5fan, thank you for your careful reading and precise correction. Here is the translation I add to the previous version:"耆那教徒试图从物质世界中超脱出来，这和印度教，佛教是相契合的。然而，在我阅读关于耆那教的资料时，我发现了耆那教与其他教派大相径庭的一个地方。"

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Cindy, thank you for your comments! I really appreciate it, and I will practice more in future.

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谢谢Sophie抬爱！可惜我proof-reading做得不够好，急于上传，竟然有打错的词，嘿嘿。Translation is hard, move on.